\Research and planning – Draft 3 – redone

Media radio drama

The progression from draft 1 to draft 2 shows a development of the script. I recognised things which I had left out and made the script disjointed. The part in the script where rather than the children knowing the words off by heart , they get taught them instead. This small paragraph is supposed to show the innocence in the children. To them its just  a game and the woman is being nice to them ; but in reality the piece is very literal. Witches live in my story and are not just part of fiction . They are portrayed as good , healing women who only have love and warmth for their home and environment.

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